Whales R Us

WRITING IDEAS
What suggestions would you make, and why?
I would suggest that Stayer did not make so many references to Disneyland, and instead talk more about what is going on with Sea-World, and Stayer needs to state her opinion more. Talking about Disneyland so much drowns out what Stayer is trying to say about Sea World.

EXPLORING IDEAS
How is the way that Stayer sees entertainment parks similar or different from the way you see them?
Our views of entertainment parks are similar. I also notice that entertainment parks claim to be educational, yet when you leave the park you seem to have learned nothing, or at least very little.